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Final edit:
My apologies for harassing you all further, but I thought some of you might like to know that I have posted the final version of this. This does not mean that this particular design has been finalized, and I'm sure there will be future developments. Thank you for your comments and tolerance, you've all been very kind. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- EDIT: Another upload of my progress, for those of you who may be interested. Granted, there is much more to revise still (size of wing muscles, finishing wing feathers, making the mouth bigger still, but a lot has gone on here. Can't spot the differences? Here: 1. crest feathers are now similar to a cockatoo's in their alignment 2.wing feathers are sleeker/harder and more suited to a wing (many thanks to ~feral-fowl for pointing this out to me! 3. head has been shrank some, the eye has been enlarged (as much as the disintegrating paper will let me, anyway... 4. Side has been altered so that he is in better perspective this time around! Thank goodness! 5. I've added some to his tail 6. His fetlock feathers are thinner and less stiff. And etc, etc. I had better stop rambling. Really, I'm boring you to tears! --------------------------------------------------------------------- Okay, so I thought I would do more technical tweaking on the design of my pegasus... mostly on the subject of the two scapulae, both equine and avian. I know that this is only a surface study, but believe me when I say that a lot of thought went into this, and what lies beneath. Some information that I have already considered in the design of this: They are mostly carnivorous- less body weight is devoted to the digestive organs/tracts, therefor making the body lighter. The pegasus have appropriate teeth, and the jaw opens wider (trust me on this, please). Also, you will notice a third "toe" on each hoof, equipped with a spur like horn. Like a raptor's talon, if you will. The large flight muscles attach to the keel-like breastbone. You can see them running along the ribs. That is where they are... and some of the lighter ones attaching over the equine scapula and to the collar bone (right?) This bit is still being worked out. I need better anatomical resources, for sure. The tail: like a bird's. The tail bone is avian, made sturdy to help lift the rear quarters of the pegasus. The wings: not only are they incredibly large, but there is a feathered expanse of membrane connecting to the hip to provide additional lift. Also, the wings are attached just behind the equine scapula, closer to the center of balance, no? Feathered mane/crest is making his head look bigger than it is, if you find that to be bothering you. Also, he's turning his head slightly to look at us. I know, I'm ruining this with my comments. Large sketch is still in progress... 14x17 sketchbook is still TOO DAMN SMALL. There, I said it. Questions, comments, critiques, and other feedback is welcome and appreciated. So let me know your thoughts, good people! This design is, to my knowledge, copyright to myself, April Schumacher. So there. I know, I know... TEXT WALL! Commentsgood job! I'd critique good and proper, but since you know my status I will critique it here....
first. foot feathers. while pretty they will hinder flight, at least this type of feather you have here. Too much surface area. perhaps something more like a saddle feather - will protect from fighting prey and create less drag if done in a medium lenght and in abundance. go whole-hog on the crest - think cockatoo. back of browridge- deeper. push the eyes towards a more forward appearance...UNLESS they dive raptor style. then leave them larger with less browridge and on the sides. the spiral motion of the raptor's decent is what makes them able to keep locked onto their prey. to allow the jaw to open like you say you must have the mouth-line go further back. good keel. ears, I have some ideas there...something like foldable more fleshy ears that can collapse like the wing but expand satellite (think bats!) the last thing - work on different types of feathers. most of the ones you're doing are soft and big, not good for fast flying or combat against prety. study raptors, hardfeathered-gamefowl, even racing pigeons. keep up the good work! I really like all the thought you've put into this! Ive also been trying to work with my Pegasus character to make her more realistic, but half the time Im too lazy to add the things in Ive thought of apart from the muscle structure the wings would do.
I really like your head structure as well, you can see its equine based but very different from an equine skull structure. -- Professing themselves to be wise, they became fools, Romans 1:22. Awesome! I really love the due claws on the legs and the feathers, I love the face and the mane, and... and... GDOAMN I love everything!
-- I saw a sign, it said: "Watch for Children" and I thought: "that's a good trade." I have learned that the people on forums, are dicks, mainly because they're 25 years old and live in their parents basement, and the only friends they have are virtual. You have no idea how refreshing it is to see a well thought-out design. Plus awesome theorising! I love that they're carnivorous! It's always been a pet peeve of mine - unrealisticly designed flying critters. Bravo! My only critique is that its left hoof seems to be angled too much towards the viewer. But the rest is superb. Can't wait to see this in more contrast/cleaned up!
-- Oh I know... Lack of any sort of realism, and also when they try to defend it, or simply deny logic. Granted, it depends on what one is going for, but I always get the feeling that people are terrified to actually take on such a concept and try to make it a bit more plausible.
The hoof... I think that was drawn in an attempt to make him seem like he's angled slightly away from us while looking towards us. Makes no sense... Gah! I hope it doesn't take me much longer... -- Mind over Matter. |
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