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Critiques
The Norse theme in the piece is well excecuted: from the magnificent equine border to Sleipnir's breed, a Norwegian Fjord horse. The only part of him that looks a bit strange is where his neck connects with his chest: perhaps it could curve a little more
I Love the idea! Not just the legs, but the mane and tail, I dont often see a design like that, its simple and effective.
The shading too, not too strong in lighting, but it still has amazing contrast and shows the muscles very well.
Also the pose, the speed, freedom and stregnth of the creature is so very well captured, i can almost see a landscape scenery behind it without it even being drawn!
My only 3 tiny crits are
the bump of the nose, for a horse perhaps straighter curve from the eye to the nose? [though i realise that you cant rub out anything with paints..]
the lower neck, maybe making it thicker where it joins with the shoulder, perhaps by bringing it out a bit?
and the dark areas above the back legs, between the stomach, and the other back leg. Perhaps if they werent as sharp or dark they wouldnt look as much like holes in the skin, or rips [unless they're meant to be?]
Thats all, as i said, the crits are so small theyre barely worth mentioning! Overall it is an amazing picture!
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